Suroy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DE_dust2]

Amazing

No comments, simply perfect...

[Akuma vs MKombat Pt.1]

Keep trying

So... you first post... OK..... not new, not revealer... one more submission on NG

Keep trying, you can do better....

To get attention you need create something new or choreography more interesting .

You need worry more about smoother movements, and frame rate.
Before you understand this, you will be prepared to put a good sequel.

This is a tip... I put my first animation on NG at the beginning of this year and I practice everyday to make a better animation sequel. But I think too this depends of your interest.

If you are satisfied... fine. But, if you wish attention... is a long way.

2/5 - To more one submission
6/10 - To your first post

Tyrantshredd responds:

Far from satisfied and I do agree that some of it was too rough and needs to be smoother. Being my first post I meant for it to be more fun than anything else. But I will make a much more professional second post for sure.

Thanks for the feedback.

[Friends vs. The Rival]

WOW... Much better

I sense the difference from the previous animation to that one... Sorry by my english I expect you understand the topics below.

---- Goodies -----

* Better exploitation /advantage from sprites,
* Dynamic fight,
* Some new effects
* (2nd scene background) Nice scenario edition
* Fluid animation (smoother)

---- Now, what you miss ----

* Bad quality audio
* inefficient music track (don't does support to this fight)
* No end (??? WTF... at leats a fade transition with as long they fall)

Result... 4/5 - 9/10

PS. Nice Work, Keep Flashing...

Slicing-Claws responds:

Yay! another pro review ^_^!

Well...music quality excuse-The MB was already big enough, so I left it.

The end was leading to the next battle :)

And the song is fine to me, I don't know why some of you dislike it.

But, thanks for the great review Suroy!

[Vampiric Wit]

Perfect...

HAhahahahahaha.... Verry funny

[Ryu vs Ken(BBBF)]

Not bad !!!

Sorry, but this one not better that "Angel Ryu vs Evil Ryu" yet... 4/5 - 8/10

The Chars movements had not been natural (fluid/ smoother).

PS. Words from BananaCrate:
"You always end the battle the same way >.> one person almost get the other but suddenly the other make a gigantic beam and win."

It's time to modify... Right?

See ya.

[madness city]

Está aí Criança

Não demorou pra conseguir um 10 /10 - 5 /5.
Essa animação mostrou que aki agente também não está de bobeira... de todas as animas que eu vi durante essa semana, realmente a sua foi a melhor de todas.

Eu esperava ouvir o som dos tiros mas editado como video clip também ficou muito bom. parabéns, você realmente merece ganhar o Madness 2008.

peixeaquatico responds:

wou vlw suroy

tudo bem se eu nam ganhar
já ganhei um 10 pra mim ta bom :D hehe

[sprite or not to sprite?]

SAD

It's a sad history, sprite movies declining on popularity..... But I will continue animating sprites, for while because I'm introducing to flash now and I don't draw.... Good look on your journey.

[another flash doodle]

Thanks

Have a nice day too. Hehehehe...